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In these five pages I give a brief introduction about VoIP, different ways using VoIP,advantages in using VoIP.
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In these five pages I give a brief introduction about Voice Over Internet Protocol (VoIP), different ways using VoIP,advantages in using VoIP.
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In these five pages I give a brief introduction to XML and databases and then present a brief introduction to my topic, web-related databases using . I then discuss some of the methods which are available for updating databases.
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In these five pages I give a brief introduction about VoIP, different ways using VoIP,advantages in using VoIP.
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Please let me know if I need to give more introductions to XML and databases with more examples.
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My next consideration will be about how the VoIP works and disadvantages in using VoIP.
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In these five pages I give a brief introduction to XML and databases and then present a brief introduction to my topic, web-related databases using . I then discuss some of the methods which are available for updating databases.
I tried to explain everything clearly using simple technical terms.
Please let me know if I need to give more introductions to XML and databases with more examples.
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In these five pages I have dealt with the first part of my project, which is to provide the readers with an overview of what e-commerce is and what the benefits and limitations of e-commerce are. In the main part of my project, which is e-commerce security, I included important aspects of e-commerce security. In this section I am trying to provide the reader with a framework that can be used to identify the needs and threats, and, the most important, propose solutions to deal with these threats.

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I am not sure if I gave enough introductory information in the security part (section 4 of my document). Do you think I should include more information before I start talking about the needs and threats of e-commerce security?

Do you think that I need to go deeper when I explain each of the needs of e-commerce security? For example availability, integrity, and so

Do you think that I presented the benefits and limitation of e-commerce in the correct way?
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I have provided information about using internet to make phone calls, definition
of the Voice Over Internet Protocol, the different ways VoIP can be used and advantages in using VoIP.
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In these five pages I have dealt with the first part of my project, which is to provide the readers with an overview of what e-commerce is and what the benefits and limitations of e-commerce are. In the main part of my project, which is e-commerce security, I included important aspects of e-commerce security. In this section I am trying to provide the reader with a framework that can be used to identify the needs and threats, and, the most important, propose solutions to deal with these threats.
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I tried to explain using general terminology minimizing any technical terms since our group has the members from different fields.

My next consideration will be on knowing how this VoIP technology works and what are the disadvantages in using it.
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I am not sure if I gave enough introductory information in the security part (section 4 of my document). Do you think I should include more information before I start talking about the needs and threats of e-commerce security?
Do you think that I need to go deeper when I explain each of the needs of e-commerce security? For example availability, integrity, and so
Do you think that I presented the benefits and limitation of e-commerce in the correct way?
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I have provided information about using internet to make phone calls, definition of the Voice Over Internet Protocol, the different ways VoIP can be used and advantages in using VoIP.

Questions/Concerns:

I tried to explain using general terminology minimizing any technical terms since our group has the members from different fields.

My next consideration will be on knowing how this VoIP technology works and what are the disadvantages in using it.