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The paper is well organized and is following APA format. But you need to concentrate on sentence formations and punctuations.
I could not understand what this particular sentence meant. requires discipline and time to follow .
Try correcting these mistakes. As far as concerned I find any other flaws.
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The paper is well organized. So you are going to discuss regarding the two methodologies and their applicability to E-commerce.
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The paper is well organized and is following APA format. But you need to concentrate on sentence formations and punctuations.
I could not understand what this particular sentence meant. requires discipline and time to follow .
Try correcting these mistakes. As far as concerned I find any other flaws.


Ram kumar.