• Should I simplify section for the history of the church? (As in, should I talk about the beginning of the church and where it is now?)
  • Do the all the dates in the history section bog down the readability of that section?
  • Are the main sections of "History," "What We Believe," "Church Services," and "General Information" enough or should they be further refined or broken into other main sections?
  • Should a small section discussing a past project of the church be included? (As in a building project or a church fundraising project?)
  • Is the section "Church Services" organized clearly? Should there be subsections to better organize all the information in that section?